I have a couple of these but they are handwritten so I'll have to type them up. Basically the teacher gives us a sentence and an allocated time to write as much as we can. Sometimes she'll give us a perspective to go from.
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This one isn't anything special; it's one that I've encountered before and thus had a firm idea of the emotions I wanted to transfix. I'm simply sharing for the sake of it, not because of its complexity.
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She recalled the book which ignited her imagination. The thought warmed her belly as her eyes fluttered shut with a sigh. The characters that she was so fond of would never leave her and if their memory ever started to fade, all she had to do was pick the book up and start her adventure afresh. The emotions that came with the novel thrilled her too. Initially, she's looked upon the book with clear disdain, raising a sceptical eyebrow to her pleading sister. But now? She was completely and utterly hooked. Not regretting a single moment of it. She'd returned to her sister's door; a hesitant fist raised to knock. When she finally had, her sister had answered immediately, smirking in recognition. The afterglow hadn't faded away, her face was still in a large grin.
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The next one's larger, but keep in mind we are on a time limit. But anyway, that was written in my first English Ext 1 class probably the reason as to why it was so short. Hope it was somewhat enjoyable.
Cal.
ahhh i loved the ending, and your discription towards the end and it's perf
ReplyDeletesigh sonali you're writing is improving it's starting to become seriously degofqeiogrbgjeibgirw AMAZING (like don't get me wrong it was good at first but now it's so much better and i'm proud)
looking forward to more, sweet cheeks!
Far, far too kind.
ReplyDeleteBut thank you.