Ashes rained down
from the sky, smudging the world a precarious shade of grey. It was the ending
of something that had never been and the beginning of something that would
never be.
Far away, someone - someone that had escaped the ending and realised the coming events smiled in satisfaction as they saw the insect flailing, seeing its movement slow down as it slowly became limp. Death had overcome the last creature that had managed to overcome all the obstacles and finally the planet, with nothing to hold on to - no life, no meaning, no thoughts; collapsed. Earth imploded in upon itself, taking the mere observer by surprise. Then the explosion billowed outwards into the shield that had been placed around it to avoid it killing the sun. Why kill a star that had so much potential energy to harvest?
He was one of the last creatures in the universe. Last he'd heard, there was only another existing female. After they'd bred, producing multiple babies that would feed off this sun in the solar system, their entire existence would be somewhat stable again. But if the female died, then the universe would hold onto him - the only conscience that it could anchor to. Of course, the suns were alive and healthy however they'd recently started depreciating, causing the remaining populations of the species of the Hradi to start fretting.
Earth was a monumental planet, which was why the observer had been ordered to watch its destruction so that their future generation would be able to understand why everything had happened and for what purpose life had conceded against the inevitable destruction. It was the humans' fault. Always the humans. They couldn't do anything right, and they had no idea what was out there. They'd awakened a creature, of such magnitude that not even the gods of the universe could stop them. And they did try and failed. They'd used all the abilities they'd had and all the while the humans had sat peacefully upon their planet, wondering why the planet's orbit was losing days and why there were so many tragedies occurring. Every single moment they spent communicating with the creature without even knowing it made them significantly dangerous. And soon enough, every species was wiped out. Except theirs - although that was close too.
That was why he was
sent to record Earth's destruction. The future universe would cheer for the
death of such miserable sops, who'd had nothing better to do in life than to
live and waste precious resources which were being sucked up from the sun.
Venus had been destroyed by Earth's obliteration and Mars' side which faced
the Earth was utterly charred and somewhat melted down. A rumbling sounded,
startling the observer into looking at his communication device. And what he
saw scared him.
From there, only
chaos could ensue. Without warning, a beep sounded, signifying the death of the
female. This was the end of the universe, indeed. He couldn't believe that he'd
thought there'd even be a chance for them. The whole universe, other than the
ignorant Earthlings had allied together to defeat this creature and even they
failed. Who was he to think that he could do better? He spun around, convinced
that it was behind him, but sighed in relief when he had the knowledge that he
would live for a minute longer. In that time however, the creature lashed out,
killing the observer on impact, before evaporating into the thread line of
space and time itself. From there, no living thing with a soul existed, not
even the tiniest of parasites and with that the universe collapsed, not having
anything to anchor itself to. Nothing to strengthen the large proportions of
the expanse that was now retreating hastily. The non-understandable ways of the
outer universe attempted to grab hold of the creature but it slithered away,
squirming through another dimension to wreak havoc there. The universe
resembled a rubber band, snapping together into a point of singularity. As the
universe cursed the humans, so did the lost souls of the different species that
had been released. No one understood how the universe worked - all they knew
was that although it wasn't something that could be communicated to; it could
communicate to you and it had a mind of its own. Dark energy was never a match
for gravity. Until now...
All matter in the
universe condensed into one point and
suddenly there was a very big bang. With the presence of sweltering heat, the
universe sighed in annoyance, realising that it had forgotten its memories
again. It'd just have to deal, it reasoned with itself, after all that's what
it had done the past million times.
And that's my first day's drabble. It's ridiculous, considering it was a quick write of fifteen minutes. It's 848 words and although I liked the plot line, I have also suggested that the theory of a big crunch is more possible. When you come to think about it... it is.
Your turn now, left-foot-fowl. I haven't edited... apologies.
Allons-y!
Honey, I've posted it (but kept editing it.. stupid edits).
ReplyDeleteI've promised myself no tumblr today.. which sucks. It's back firing, but I hope I'll manage.
The big bang, huh? That was pretty cool. Especially the universe itself having a soul of its own. Everything seemed alive- and eternal at that.
Well written, lady. Atta girl!
This is fun! Can't wait till tomorrow (I will soon regret the thirty drabble day promise.. this is just like NaNo WriMo. I WILL FINISH IT DAMN IT.
I commented too. I'll edit mine tomorrow because I need to go to bed now!
DeleteThanks, lovely! I'm glad you liked it - although I'm aware of the multiple mistakes that I've made. But that's alright. That's what you're here for; to be my criticism.
Ahahaha, yes. That you will. Remember the punishments and that should be incentive enough.
Talk to you tomorrow! :)
Your writing is really just.. shit. I'm so jealous of your description. I'll edit shit later but now I gotta run! Your writing is really just.. shit. But it's dark, cookie. I challenge you into writing something light in the next thirty days. I just wanna see how you'd handle it.
ReplyDeleteSee yeh tomorrow!
...light?
DeleteBut that's no fun! I'm not too amazing at writing humour so it's just me ranting about rainbows and sunshine.
Shit as in you hate it, or you're speechless?
Don't make me do this...